New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Very impressive poem. I like your opening lines – they flow beautifully and set the stage for the rest of your message. A few suggestions: "can not" instead of "can't" – "smooth" instead of "smoothen" which does not exist in English – and separate "I" and "am" – and finally, I don't know if you need the last part of your ending line "of my dark pathway" as " "For I am the lamp" says it all. Well done. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/iam-the-lamp-of-my-way
Original Post by Seema Dinesh
Iam the lamp of my way
<p style="text-align: center;">When I enter a dark pathway</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">I garner light as I sway</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">For I am the lamp of my way.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">The darkness can't consume me,</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">The deep dark cave can't hinder me.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">For Iam the lamp of my way.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">No matter how bleak and gloomy,</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Let the cave be dark and desolate,</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">I can smoothen it away,</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">For Iam the lamp of my way,</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">For Iam the lamp of my dark pathway!</p>
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