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  • #17592
    WriterCoder
    Participant

    Hi Susan ,

    I saw your post on ig for the featured poem . I really loved the concept and moved over to your website. I read the last featured poem and it was so heartfelt 💜

    I would like to submit a poem too. 

    I have titled this as “Dust and stars”

    I lay buried in dust.

    among specks of pollen on earth,

    and I’d be happy if I could find,

    a few to stand by my side.

    But God said to me ,

     “Oh dear !

    A place as such in here ?”

    He smiled while I’d weep and scream ,

    He threw me up,

     in the unknown realms !

    Trapped in violent storms ,

    I waited for my fall .

    And a dozen chances I took ,

    To poise myself as I looked ,

    Everyone around 

    had their places found.

    “Why , Oh Lord why? , I’d ask,

    Don’t you hear my cries ?”

    And as soon as I sighed,

    And gave up all my might,

    The night had grown the darkest,

    and the storms around had died.

    A hand gently came ,

    and nudged me to take the last step.

    And when I turned around , I saw,

    What I deemed to be a fall ,

    was in fact an ascent tall !

    And while I thought I fell ,

    I rose above the hell.

    “Dust and dirt and land ,

    said the Lord,

    “aren’t your place to be !

    You my child shall stand,

    among these shining stars you see.”

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    #18164
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you so much for submitting this very emotional and visual poem.  I have very much enjoyed reading it and will carefully select the featured poem for next week – yours will certainly be in the mix!  Thank you for following my website and for being a part of the passion of poetry, Susan

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