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    Sneha
    Participant

    The past,
    A strong gut of regret
    And the ever-ringing voices;
    Pain,
    Where the thorax meets the abdomen—
    A kind, of unknown origin,
    Or varied —
    A liver that has given up,
    Or nights spent sitting on the living room floor,
    Or cups, stained with lipstick and coffee,
    A head that belonged on the stakes —
    That could see things, one shouldn’t.
    One wouldn’t write,
    If one could afford to;
    For one ages faster
    But never dies
    In poetry.
    Death —
    Stars,
    Young lovers,
    Children and good fathers,
    Evil rarely deserve death.

    My bones ache too much
    To carry my soul well.

    #18190
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you so very much for submitting this powerful poem.  You have a real sense of the rhythm and imagery that makes poetry work.  You should be very proud of this poem!  I have received so many wonderful poems, it will be a very difficult choice, choosing just one.  I am grateful for your interest in my site and my mission to spread the beauty and power of poetry to all corners of the globe.  Have a lovely day, Susan

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