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    meet@rathod_111
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    You are born with the wings,
    Then why to Crawl?
    In order to rise,
    You must have to fall.
    Go beyond all your limits,
    And break every wall.
    You are born with the wings,
    Then why to Crawl?

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    Susan Katz
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    Many thanks for submitting your poem for consideration for next week’s Featured Poem of the Week.  I like the way you have contained your message in just these very few lines.  I like the way your poem begins and I like how you take it simply, clearly to a place where wings, rising above, is the answer.  I respect that English may not be your first language and so there are some moments when the poem strays because of language, but it is beautifully conceived and I truly applaud you for a job well done.  Have a very creative day, Susan

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