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    mypoems126
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    Everytime our eyes meet , 

    You tell me a story .

    That story which was never told ,

    And which makes love run down till my feet .

     

    Everytime I look into your eyes ,

    You grant me with kindness .

    Which makes me think ,

    What would it be if you were mine ?

     

    Everytime we meet each other ,

    My heart sinks in the ocean deep .

    Which makes me think ,

    What would it be if you always stayed by my side ?

     

    Everytime our hands touch so close ,

    I feel the warmth of your skin still .

    Which makes me think ,

    What would it be if you never let me go ?

     

    Everytime we have words with each other ,

    My lips keeps shuddering shy .

    Which makes me think ,

    What would it be if our souls kissed shamelessly ?

     

    Everytime we end up together ,

    I solemnly wish for this while , to not end .

    Which makes me think ,

    What would it be if we were meant to be ?

     

     

    And all I yearned for was a forever ,

    But that was an eerie for the heavens in glee.

    Shattered into pieces , it suddenly fell ,

    My heart broke down , seeking answers for me .

     

    For all that was given , it’s love ,

    And maybe that heart of yours was never mine . 

    Also this one here , I have lost that too ,

    But even in these times , I had our moments to confine .

     

     

    This throbbing heart of mine stay ,

    Getting lost into these gloaming thoughts of blue . 

    Sanguinely searching for a shimmer of your desire ,

    My achy heart just waits , to be loved by you .

     

     

    And now I knw , 

    To bow down when in need and To stand 

    up in every fall . 

    As my heart have realised , 

    What you gave me other than pain . 

    You gifted me the ecstasy of never ,

    Being in melancholy again . 

     

     

     

     

    #18217
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Many thanks for submitting your poem for consideration for next week’s Featured Poem of the Week.  I very much appreciate that English is not your first language but, in spite of that, you have written a poem that is powerful, passionate, purposeful, and heartfelt.  I feel the emotion and the longing, the hope and the disappointment – and then, the resolution to move on and never let your heart suffer that kind of hurt again.  Good job!  Have a wonderfully creative day, Susan

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