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  • April 17, 2021 at 11:21 am #17644
    Vishnunaidu
    Participant

    Her eyes were so beautiful,

    They didn’t deserve to cry.

    Her hair was magnificent,

    Always complementing those lovely eyes.

    Her face was so pretty,

    She needed no make up,

    She looked so innocent,

    And didn’t even deserve a breakup.

    She was so beautiful and bold,

    Never even wore gold

    One look from her was enough for me

    My mind keeps on asking

    This beautiful, how can she be?

    April 17, 2021 at 1:38 pm #18220
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you so much for sending your poem to be considered as Featured Poem of the Week, for next week.  You have a lovely flow to your lines and there is a softness about the tone that is quite appealing.  I wish you a very lovely and creative day, Susan

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