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  • April 19, 2021 at 1:28 am #17656
    Janhavi Munde
    Participant

    A cold hand

    Running down

    the back of your neck

    A blow of the

    Autumn wind

    A turn of the

    Pages of your book

    A sudden shiver

    down your spine

    A note played wrong

    on the keys of a piano

    A darkening of the skies

    A thundering of

    Zeus’ bolts

    A chill along the green

    A clenching of the heart

    A clenching of the heart

    A whisper

    A whisper

    A sickening

    And you know it has come again.

    April 19, 2021 at 12:37 pm #18228
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you so very much for submitting your poem to be considered for Featured Poem of the Week.  I like the way the poem flows – I like the way you used repetition, and I like the powerful message that comes pounding through.  Well done, Susan

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