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    Bagath Manish
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    He now rather FIERCELY tried erasing it and almost monstrously,

    His towering RAGE was

    burning so hot, 

    Now he wants to COVER it up!

    He knows it!

    With that Eraser literally crying! 

    That man was a wild DRAGON that moment!

    But he wasn’t able to ERASE it

    But that furious man who just looked like as if he was Burning with an ANGRY Flame so furiously, 

    tried again more WILDLY,

    Now, 

    The white paper began to have a bit of a BLACKISH tinge about it

    It looked like as if that had been erased but it wasn’t erased 

    And in the midst of that marvelous crowd of the eraser shavings, the Eraser was slowly CONTRACTING

    Finally, he could not erase it and could not do anything about it

    As GUILT wouldn’t erase off that easily!

    #18257
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you for submitting this very powerfully felt poem for consideration as Featured Poem of the Week.  There is definitely a great deal of emotion and energy fueling this poem and I do thank you for sharing it with me.  Have a very happy and creative day, Susan

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