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    iammanseee
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    Open sky, but I felt trapped.

    Never asked ‘why?’ but I still lived like that. 

    Stars and comets were my favorite view, 

    Don’t ask how I saw them even when I was trapped in a room. 

    I used to cheer whenever clouds showered, 

    It felt like my innocence was again powered. 

    It was blissful doom, 

    Don’t ask how I felt it even when I was trapped in a room. 

    But it all crashed when I opened my eyes, 

    I saw my mind has fabricated beautiful lies. 

    But it wasn’t his fault that I gave into temptation, 

    I was very young when I started loving hallucinations. 

    I was beaten and bruised as the demon ruined my muse, 

    I still felt heaven in the morning dues. 

    The view made my heart swoon, 

    Don’t ask how I knew it even when I was trapped in a room. 

    So, I learned how to accept temptation 

    Because that is what kept me alive, 

    My hallucinations.

     

    #18252
    Susan Katz
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    Thank you so much for sharing this most interesting poem with me and submitting it to be considered for our Featured Poem of the Week option.  I very much appreciate the time and emotion that went into writing it.  Have a very happy and creative day, Susan

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