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    When your mind speaks your soul,
    It plans to hit heaps of goals,
    No second thoughts about the possible trolls,
    As you always got to play your role,
    Realms of thoughts prick my soul,
    Thoughts never so fascinating,
    Always make me believe time and again,
    Dude! Your story is in making,
    As if coal wished so long when it will turn gold,
    Realms of thoughts prick my soul,
    What makes so passionate about something?
    May be the love of the people I am earning,
    Everybody wishes to lead a life full of bling,
    Our dreams make us feel like kings,
    When the dawn makes the dark prowl,
    Realms of thoughts prick my soul..

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    Susan Katz
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    Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Week.  You create some lovely visual images.  I particularly liked, “…the dawn makes the dark prowl…”  I appreciate your sharing you poem with me, Susan

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