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  • April 20, 2021 at 11:05 pm #17682
    kritishpalrecha
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    I want the time to cease,

    I want to feel that peace.

     

    Everything with you seems so beautiful,

    Your loving heart is my peaceful tool.

     

    Your Every smile is my most precious asset,

    I want to keep that each moment safely in my

    heart’s closet. 

     

    You are my moonlight in the darkness of night,

    You are my star that makes my life bright.

     

    Only you can calm my soul’s rising wave,

    You make me strong, You make me brave.

     

    I mean each and every written line.

    And i can proudly say ,”Mom ,She is mine”.

    April 21, 2021 at 9:55 am #18274
    Susan Katz
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    Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Week.  I very much enjoyed the gentle rise and fall of your images.  As I read it, I was reminded of the waves in a quiet sea, gently coming in an going out.  Nicely done.  Thank you for sharing with me, Susan

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