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    nostalgia_elf
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    Loving you was never a mistake
    but loving the traitor in you was my mistake.
    Not knowing you wasn’t my fault
    But not knowing the traitor in you was my fault.
    Being alone and searching for
    the real mate and the real love isn’t wrong,
    but being with you and believing
    in your fake love can never be right .

    You’re the lyrics which I’m supposed to learn
    but should never sing loud .
    You’re the novel which I should understand
    but should never like the contents.
    You are the person
    who always set in my heart ,
    but your dishonesty paved the way
    to the darkest boundaries of my heart !

    Oh love,
    You would never know about the aching soul of mine
    which longs for your love and honesty
    but shattered into pieces long ago
    for your unique and sensual betrail.
    But still in the hope of getting you one day
    in the way it had wished for !

    ~by Ashmita Dunguri

    #18272
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration as Featured Poem of the Week.  You have found some very lovely ways to tell your story and have some touching images in this very emotional poem.  Thank you so much for sharing it with me, Susan

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