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    Prem Damania
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    We said it was forever – said we’d never part,

    I knew it was a line, but I still gave both of you my heart.

     

    Said you would stay, promised you could.

    You chose to walk away, I knew you would.

     

    You’re not there anymore, my dearest friends.

    I hate to say this, but it is our end.

     

    By day you’re one person, by night another.

    Neither of them have anything to do with each other.

     

    I sit here and cry for you – not for me,

    What you’ve become, I wish you could see.

     

    In your life you make friends that you’re sure are true,

    Nothing else matters, except what’s between them and you.

     

    You don’t know if anyone has ever before felt this way,

    For them you took breaths; you wanted to be alive every day.

     

    It hurts to lose a friend; it gives you the saddest frown,

    And when a second one bails, it’s like getting kicked while you’re down.

     

    And it hurts to be accused of something you didn’t do

    You guys should know better than anyone that I would never even think to.

     

    You planted a knife in my back.

    You were my life, but now, my memories of you are completely black.

     

    I am afraid to love another, but I know I shouldn’t be,

    Because the people in my life are perfect for me.

     

    There is this game I play,

    Where I close my eyes and fade away.

     

    I can’t believe it’s true,

    but in this place, I can’t even remember that I loved you.

     

    You can’t that’s already done

     

     

    #18288
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem.  Such strong emotions, so powerfully stated make us feel your message.  I thank so much for sharing, Susan

    #18293
    Prem Damania
    Participant

    Thank you for giving me this platform

    #18297
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    You are most welcome! We poets must support one another. Have a very lovely day and stay safe and well, Susan

    #18394
    Bella
    Participant

    It’s such a beautiful and heart touching piece. You have expressed your story so exquisitely. Wow!

    #18412
    Tarunsunny5
    Participant

    Happy and proud
    That I had no feelings today
    No random waves of sadness
    But iam still awake
    I wish we had a talk
    Atleat a last goodbye?
    Before leaving our mental states.
    U sent through your mind
    Did u feel my heart?
    It was my mistake, I've done so wrong.
    Helping you in tests
    And gifting your own picture
    I had no feelings for you
    Until we fought for that chocolate
    We used nicknames
    We exchanged our numbers
    I miss back those old days
    But we grew so old
    We had a promise
    That u broke in the quite evening
    It's done so cool
    We never looked at our faces.

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