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    archi_171
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    The pressure’s killing me; I’m dying

    I’m doing my best; I’m trying

    Once upon a time I was flying

    Now I’m just sitting in my room crying

    My parents are on me spying

    When to my friends I be replying

    My friends think I be lying

    While I sit there sipping tea sighing

    The rules I keep defying

    I’m annoyed by my relatives prying

    I want love that’s underlying

    But his calls I keep declining

    My priorities I be deciding

    My mistakes I keep rectifying

    Teachers keep work assigning

    This isn’t at all surprising

    The thoughts in my mind keep striking

    I keep on quickly writing

    In this fake world I keep smiling

    To stop myself from resigning

     ~ Archi Shah

    #18320
    sanat_0403
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    This is incredibleee😍🔥♥️
    Love this poemmm♥️
    Waiting for moreee🔥🔥

    #18321
    Yatharth Shah
    Participant

    Amazing 👍👍

    #18323
    Yatharth Shah
    Participant

    Amazing 👍👍

    #18324
    Niomii
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    Good job sis:) made me proud<3

    #18343
    archi_171
    Participant

    Thank youuu!!!

    #18344
    archi_171
    Participant

    Thank youuu!!!

    #18345
    archi_171
    Participant

    Thank youuu!!!

    #18350
    chaarvi2010
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    SUPERB

    KEEP IT UP👍

    #18351
    Drhemalisshah
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    What a thought of every teen.so deep n true

    #18352
    VinayShah76
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    A very beautiful way of representing the thoughts of pressure studies.

    Wonderful feelings.

    #18355
    archi_171
    Participant

    Thank youu!!

    #18356
    archi_171
    Participant

    Thank youu!!

    #18357
    archi_171
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    Thank youu!!

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