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    Captured.0519
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    In and out
    In and out
    Im gasping for breath
    Im gasping for real bond

    With societal burden
    With society expectations
    Im bleeding my lungs out

    Stop . no just stop
    With your fake concern
    With shallow words
    With sugar coated laughs

    Which come either too late
    Or never .
    Fan hanging there
    Giving me thoughts

    Blades lying there
    Showing me
    Beauty of red

    Heights , once giving serienty
    Showing the path of
    Utter numbness

    Pills – pain relieving
    Is selling me up relief all my soreness

    THINKING about , about loss , pain
    Think about happy moments too
    About moments of happy candid photos
    Think about next day
    A day with new hope
    New start
    Think about one step
    Think about one step at time

    -bhumi jain

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    #18363
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  There is an almost “painful – frantic” rhythm to the poem that adds to the message and the drama.  I very much appreciate you sharing your poem with me, Susan

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