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  • May 5, 2021 at 8:58 am #17766
    Harshika Arora
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    She holds up to a deep commotion,

    Her life was toxic , drained and a failure,

    It was a far fetched vision ,

    She made a deep dive and returned in better version.

     

     

    Azure seas , pebbles around her sphere,

    Did she hold back on her ordeals,

    Guild intrigued she paid no heed to fling back,

    All she made a deep dive to relish her life .

     

     

     

    May 5, 2021 at 9:08 am #18374
    Susan Katz
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    Thank you so much for sending your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month, for June.  There are some wonderful moments in this poem and a true sense of personal commitment to telling your story.  Thank you for sharing your work with me, Susan

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