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    kayyy.a.t
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    The light was dim and the television was on, 

    My sister adamantly watching another rom-com.

    The clock stroke twelve which conveyed,

    The commencement of the day I first saw him years ago, actively being replayed.

    Sitting there trying to subtle my expressions,

    I read his message through the notifications.

    Alongside, my best friend congratulated me entirely proud,

    And I just sat there, feeling emotionally drowned.

    Reminiscing all the moments and intense hurdles we had experienced together already,

    There was a wave of sentiments entrenched throughout my body,

    Despite the societal differences, we held onto the hope of being united and accepted one day happily,

    And in that instance, I apprehended the strength of loving someone truly.

    Overwhelmed, I open his message in haste,

    Reading his sweet deliverance of feelings with taste,

    Eyes well up, as I feel this irrepressible realisation in my pit,

    Unable to express much virtually, I just reply with complete honesty that, “you are it”.

     

     

    #18378
    Susan Katz
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    Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for
    Featured Poem of the Month, for June.  There is a wealth of feeling in your poem and “feelings” are what inspires poetry, so thank you very much for sharing this very personal poem with me.  – Susan

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