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    Shafrin
    Participant

    If I am Saturn,

    You are my ring;

    We centered each other,

    Having the comets colliding ;

    We created a living space,

    That is amazingly breathtaking;

    We have long days,

    That are neverending;

    We make the most amazing couple ,

    Among the rest;

    Our endless energies,

    Are fueled by the stardust .

     

    #18381
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month, for June.  Your poem speaks eloquently of love and commitment.  Thank you for sharing it with me, Susan

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