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    Being_oasis
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                                      What am I?

    In a lonely pensive mood, I thought

    What am I?

    Besides the combination of dust, first,

    Then of the liquid drop

    In a humble low tone, the heart asked

    What are you?

    Besides, stitched bones and flesh

    In the forlorn state, the mind questioned

    What will be you?

    When the union of earth takes place

     

    As I was baffled with the questions

    Wind entered through the window

    I realized I am the breeze of smiles and laughter

    Rushing into every home

    I am that purifying storm sent by him

    For the help of Noah

     

    As I went towards the window

    To thank the wind for its grateful help,

    The shining moon winked at me

    Making me realize,

    I am the bright hope of the dead night.

    With the scars not sufficient to hide my shine

     

    As I moved out in the glorious light,

    The swirling tree rustled its leaves.

     I realized,

    I am the voice of truth and justice,

    Can’t be silenced by the shout of lies

     

    As I walked towards the sound

    The stars above twinkled at me,

    Making me realize

    It is Almighty that guides

    Only he could make me

    Walk the righteous path

    Or could make me evil’s lard

     

    All these visions gave the answer

    Of all the questions the soul proposed

    I might be forgotten after union

    But the shade of my work in life

    Might lessen the burden on the scales

    When I return to Almighty’s side

     

                                                       -Mohammad Owais (student)

                                                         St. Francis’ College

    #18434
    Susan Katz
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    Your poem takes us on a voyage of self-discovery, giving us a view into your own, personal, inner journey from “dust” to “the shade of my work in life/might lesson the burden on the scales.”  Quite an intense and emotional journey of self revelation and, you do have some very fine lines and images in your poem.  I thank you so much for sharing it with me, Susan

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