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    Rabani14
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    A Delightful Weather 

    It is such a delightful weather

    making me feel so cheerful

    and as light as a feather,

    waving of the trees with the breeze

    marking the beginning of rain

    a rainy day, a joyful day,

    creating hopes on a beautiful day.

    Inhaling the smell so sweet 

    and exhaling all the worries 

    feeling the tiny little drops

    falling on my hand 

    I look above and wonder,

    how mesmerizing the sky looks!

    A day filled with thoughts

    carrying me in a different world 

    where everything seems so unbelievable,

    with the sound of rain,

    with the chirping of birds,

    my heart is singing

    enjoying the weather with all my heart,

    I look around and wonder 

    what a pleasant and delightful day it looks!

    -Rabani Kaur 

     

     

    #18443
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you so very much for sharing your poem with me and for submitting it to be considered for Featured Poem of the Month for July.  I am touched by your connection to nature and how carefully you observe the world around you, from “the chirping of the birds” to “the tiny little drops (of rain) falling” on your hand.  The first rule of the poet is, first notice everything!  Thank you again, for sharing.  – Susan

    #18449
    Sushmita sharma
    Participant

    Beautifully Penned poem

    #18450
    Rabani14
    Participant

    Thank you so much ma’am..this means a lot and always grateful for this opportunity.

    #18461
    Rabani14
    Participant

    Thank you so much..this means a lot @sushmita sharma

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