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    Captured.0519
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    When in broad day light
    You grop me
    In the bus full of people
    With their eyes finding scenary
    Where my palpitations are not visible

    When walking back to home
    You just stuck your tongue
    Muteing not only my voice
    But my soul too
    When people dismiss me
    On basis of choice of my clothes

    When nights go blind
    And my voice echo
    With sound of terror
    With Adriline rushing through veins
    When only instict should be fight or flight
    But my body go numb

    When my clothes are tattered
    But your pleasure blooms
    When my strength dies , with me
    From the weight of your body
    When our body cojoins
    And my soul crushes

     

     

     

     

     

    #18467
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you for submitting this very intense and emotional poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month for July.  Your poem has a very real and very meaningful message and we can feel your pain, your anguish your “crushed soul.”  I would suggest, if I may, that you go over and check your English translation, as there are instances where the tenses are wrong, spelling is wrong, or meaning is not quite right.  The concept of “muting not only your voice” but your soul, as well – is strong and powerful.  Thank you for sharing with me, Susan

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