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When the dark clouds,
Rushed with pelting rain,
A foolish thought just,
Crossed my mind,
That it might end,
My invincible pain.
Well done. Short, crisp and to the point and, poetic. I am delighted you shared your work with me and will be featuring it in a poetladykatz Instagram post in the next week or so. Keep on writing! – Susan
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