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  • July 3, 2021 at 10:48 am #17856
    La belle dam sans merci
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    The heart dazzles like a brothel, 

    Prostituting upon emotions,

    Aerates with venomous blood, 

    Of severe interior afflictions 

    July 3, 2021 at 3:33 pm #18481
    Susan Katz
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    What an interesting poem and it certainly packs a punch. I’m not sure I understand the meaning completely, but then – perhaps I wasn’t meant to.  I am impressed with your brevity and how much emotion and power you managed to incorporate in four short lines.  Well done.  I will definitely be considering your work to be featured in one my Instagram posts in the next two weeks.  Your friend in poetry, Susan

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