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  • July 4, 2021 at 6:16 pm #17869
    Svk86
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    I wrestle with my inner demons,

    I stumble into the dark abyss

    As my lungs fill with the pungent smell of defeat. 

     

    July 6, 2021 at 12:24 pm #18496
    Susan Katz
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    Well done!  Short and to the point.  While I would have liked to have an image for your “inner demons” rather than your telling me you have them, I think you have managed to convey some very strong feelings with just a very few words – and that is exactly what poetry is all about.  I will feature your poem, within the next couple of weeks, on my Instagram page.  Thank you so much for sharing,  Susan

    July 6, 2021 at 3:49 pm #18499
    Svk86
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    Thank you. I go by @twin_indie_terrors on instagram 🙂

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