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    Ishita
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    I got trapped when my wings flapped,the world is very cruel it always shows it duals! No matter how much you try you always get only cry because i got trapped when my wings flapped!

     

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    Susan Katz
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    Thank you for sharing.  I’m a little confused about the meaning of the poem, “I got trapped when my wings flapped.”  Perhaps you could be a little clearer and use some visual imagery to express your obviously, very deep and heartfelt emotions.  Are your “wings” a metaphor for courage?  I would love to know more about your poem and thank you so much for sharing it with me, Susan

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