I really like this very short, but very meaningful poem. I would like to suggest that you rethink the order of the words in the last line. It doesn’t come across the way it should – it’s not “full of stars in my hand” so much as it is, a hand full of stars. In any event, I would, if you would consider a bit of rearranging of words in the last line, very much like to feature it, in the next couple of weeks, on the poetladykatz Instagram page. Let me know and thank you so very much for sharing your work with me, Susan
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