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    @srijitrahaofficial
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    I would have loved thee more

    — Srijit Raha

    I would have loved thee more
    I wished thee stay for aye
    Gripping my arms in breast of yours
    So dimmed my wits that believed this life
    But failed to notice its shadow.
    Now I score thy grave to see thee more
    And sleep with thee in this dark meadow.
    My prose for thee have grown into weeds
    So stiff, so pale…
    With lifeless views.
    My blood had shrank in inks of nibs
    That sketches the ribs of yours.
    I smell thy hairs
    I smell thy torcs
    And kiss it over and over
    To cry in thee,
    To be in thee,
    To fade in thee forever.

     

     

    #18506
    Susan Katz
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    Your poem has a very classical feel to it.  I can feel the emotion and the pain.  I’m sorry to say it is a bit long for the current request for two to four line poems.  I am always happy to read work submitted and thank you so much for your interest in poeteladykatz and for sharing your work with me, Susan

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