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    sumanshubhanshi
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    On a moving train,
    That carries us,
    In varied compartments.
    I wish, I meet you more than once.
    The past which it leaves behind.
    The future which is predictably visible.
    I wish, we step together on the nearest station.
    We may have different directions.
    Though, I wish, we decorate our home in the end.
    You might like Italian,
    And I would love Indian,
    Though, I wish, we cook together in our little kitchen.
    You might sleep late at night,
    And I would be an early riser.
    Though, I wish, we sit together admiring the beautiful night sky.
    Joy and laughter would shape our bond.
    Love and smiles must nourish life.
    And the train of life must go on,
    Till I lie on my death bed,
    And you sit nearest to me,
    Hoping to spend a few more seconds of eternal love.

    #18530
    Susan Katz
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    What a “passionate” and loving poem.  I like the image that you carry throughout the poem, of “life as a train ride” inevitably reaching its destination.  “Love and smiles must nourish life.” is a very nice line.  I congratulate you on your effort and thank you so much for sharing your poem with me.  At the moment, I am only featuring 2 to 4 line poems on my Instagram page, but do know I was very pleased to read your work.  Your friend in poetry, Susan

    #18533
    sumanshubhanshi
    Participant

    Thank You Susan! Means a lot to me

    #18534
    sumanshubhanshi
    Participant

    You can post and tag me on Instagram. My Instagram Id is: @everythingthatfeels

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