Unannounced sudden Knock on your door But your fragile Heart not willing To open the door Mind not ready To accept the Sound of the bell
Some questions Just popping In your head But mind is busy Distracting itself Not to answer But heartbeat still Gives proof of Something existence Inside you
U try to run U try everything But it become useless and u Start enjoying every unplanned moments And finally you fall And it just happens
Thank you for sharing your poem with me. I feel the emotion and the uncertainty that the poem is expressing and there is a nice (and happy) resolution to the poem. I would have liked to have seen more in the way of images (less telling and more showing) but there is no doubt that this poem came from the heart. It is a bit long for me to consider for my current request for 2 to 4 line, un-rhymed poems, using imagery. But I am very grateful for your interest in poetladykatz and thank you, once again, for sharing your work with me. Your friend in poetry, Susan
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