Such a very warm and loving poem. Thank you for sharing it with me. What I would have liked to have seen is something in the way of imagery. For example: A hug can heal you in seconds – a hug, warm as a… a hug, like a…. And, in your last line, perhaps you could give us an image for “hurt.” That heals you whenever tears run like rain down your cheeks… Just a few suggestions that I hope will inspire your to explore the wonderful world of imagery (metaphors and similes.) I will consider your poem for featuring, over the next two weeks, on my poetladykatz Instagram page. But, I would be so happy to see it edited (adding imagery) and resubmitted. Your friend in poetry, Susan
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