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    niha ks
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    Soon knew about words covered by snowy lies; could never defrost from her sore heart! Can melt from peaks cause of golden glint.

    Lies aren’t well-built; someday will slide-off ;Through bluish ocean; Untill yellow flash.

     
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    Susan Katz
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    Thank you for sharing your work with me.  I will confess to being a bit confused by the (graph?) that came along with your poem and with the way the poem moves, and is presented on the page.  Could you, if you like, let me know what your intent was?  Words that are lies – not being able to defrost in her heart – nice!  – Susan

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