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    Shreya__singh30
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    When life seems ironical
    And words seem fake,
    When emotions are valueless
    And humanity stands for sake,
    When situations are worst
    But its image seems great,
    When they so called understand
    But just say watch and wait,
    The bruises seem so brutal
    Like the one who did was paid,
    When the most trustworthy person hurts
    And the stereotype breaks,
    When tears roll down each day
    And the next day I smile
    But the irony still stays…
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    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    What a very emotional poem.  Thank you for sharing it with me.  I could have hoped for less rhyme and more imagery and, the request this week was for a two line poem, using imagery, that describes a feeling.  I like the journey the poem takes us on and I like that at the end, you “smile.”  Your friend in poetry, Susan

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