Very dark and emotional – and I do like the image of the well. However, I’m wondering about the “well” consuming all of your from within.” A well might drown you or prevent you from escaping but, consuming you from within seems a stretch. I wonder if you might rethink how your image works – and perhaps come up with something more in keeping with the theme of “well.” In any event, your piece is well written and I would love to see it again, if you decide to rework it. Your friend in poetry, Susan
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