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  • July 25, 2021 at 4:16 am #17946
    kavya prakash
    Participant

    As the night sky turns moon glow…

    your thoughts turn you ablaze in beauty 

     

    July 25, 2021 at 9:07 am #18587
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Lovely!  You have truly captured the essence of the assignment – a two line poem, using imagery, that describes a feeling.  I can feel the love and I can feel the passion.  If I may, and this is just a suggestion, the word “make” does not work grammatically – “turn” is far more accurate.  Just a thought.  I will definitely, whether you edit or not, be featuring your poem in a future Instagram poetladykatz post.  Thanks you so much for sharing.  Your friend in poetry, Susan

    July 25, 2021 at 9:49 am #18589
    kavya prakash
    Participant

    Thank you so much for your valuable comment. I have edited the word make as you said. I am really excited to hear good comments for my little work.
    Thank you

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