The wind in my sails will always prevail the intensity of dusk that your criticism instigates, you can pursue, your persistent brawl but the ambience I sow cannot be drawn.
Thank you very much for sharing your poem with me. I very much like “intensity of dusk” as an image for “criticism” and would have loved to have seen more in the way of imagery throughout this short, two-line poem. I think you have delivered your message very well, and very thoughtfully. Your friend in poetry, Susan
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