I find your poem to be very moving, the plea to search beyond yourself in order to find yourself, is a lovely concept. “Let the wind reach up to your soul…” is a nice image – I like that the wind has to “reach up” and I also very much liked “Let the shimmer (of moonlight) bloom in you…” You might want to review your grammar a bit as there are places where a word needs to be added (or deleted) in order for the lines to be grammatically correct. But, overall, a fine effort and I thank you so very much for sharing it with me. Your friend in poetry, Susan
.
