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    RG983
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    For the poetry submission:

     

    Pain & Pleasures

    Life- A crest and trough of intuitive emotions,

    Imperfect which art to measure our deeds;

    For ripples art interim, in those countless drops of Adam’s ale,

    Ah! Their gentle flow- A prelude to the endless tale.

    The sun- tis’ encompassing those stars at bloom,

    Igniting souls to perceive their way;

    Daredevil sailors, who travel through dark nights,

    Renders those stars, voyaging back to their land.

    The life, tis’ ending & worries art minuscule,

    Mere dreams- A way to bear all pleasure;

    But when we desire, to sentence the unknown,

    An obnoxious mutiny- to ensnare holy soul.

    O love- Ye be the designator of some emotion,

    For some, ye art an ineffectual casket;

    & then those impulsive, who art fervent to savor,

    Whast true love is- An elixir of desire.

    O cosmic attires- Tailored to prettify the world,

    With edifice- such lofty, stirring revered Caelum;

    Tis’ sinful, humans’ art erect before the Lord,

    Now art realizing, with genuflect in regret.

    Viridity- Tis’ a symphony to the eternal passage,

    Whist or feverishness, unpredicted in the kismet;

    Éclat or vain- Endure ye pursuit,

    For whast leal, tis’ amid pains & pleasures.

    -R.G.

    #18668
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you so much for submitting your very lyrical and philosophical poem for consideration as Featured Poem of the Month.  I find your poem to be well written and speaking in a voice that is both classical in tone and yet, somehow contemporary, as well.  I do think your poem, at times, is a little difficult to understand – but then, poetry must be felt and visualized, as well as understood, and we certainly feel the emotion in your poem.  I will be announcing the chosen poem by the end of the first week of November.  Thank you again, Your friend in Poetry, Susan

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