Poetry Talk

Very romantic poem.  I am a bit confused by the line “My love who calls you thy…” is it “thine” or “mine” – thy, I don’t think is quite the right word.  However, having said that, I can feel your emotion and genuine commitment to making us, the reader, feel something and be involved in the story you are telling.  Another suggestion – don’t worry so much about the rhyme – poetry should be more dependent on imagery than a rhyme at the end of each line.  Thank you very much for submitting your poem.  I will consider it for Featured Poem of the Month for December.  Your friend in poetry, Susan