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    Ekta
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    She paints canvas with her thoughts…!!

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    Susan Katz
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    Again, a very warm and touching thought.  Almost lyrical.  The line, however from a grammatical point of view, needs either an “a”  She paints a canvas with her thoughts…” or “She paints canvases (plural) with her thoughts…:”  I do truly like these delightful, one line “poems!”  Again, I thank you for sharing, Susan

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