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    Tiny glowing star
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    I am rowing a boat called “Life”,

    And I don’t know when I reach my destination,

    With so many flaws and claws,

    The path becomes more significant to watch!

     

    Will the fate become my sun,

    Or will it become my thunder to concern?

    Destiny lies with their hands,

    And i am rowing along with faith!

     

    I am rowing this boat cautiously,

    Unable to predict a upcoming tide,

    Where might this boat lead me?

    I don’t know the answer yet!

     

    Meeting both foe and friends,

    My journey has become a fairytale story,

    With astonishments to pen down,

    Maybe a time to scribble in my diary!

     

    Ahead of this journey,

    Lies my fated destiny,

    Where I can be proud and carry my pride,

    Of this boat called “Life!”

    – Swetha 

     

    #18751
    Susan Katz
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    Thank you for sending your very “thoughtful” poem about this journey, we are all on, called life.  I can well imagine why, in these strange and troubled times, one might spend time contemplating their journey through the, often rough and unpredictable. waters of life.  You are a deep and poetic thinker.  I am very impressed with how you deal with the things that trouble you or, at the very least, perplex you.  I am truly delighted that you choose to share your poems with me.  – Susan

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