Thank you for sharing. This is a delightful poem! I like the journey you take us on and I loved your ending. If I were to suggest anything, it would be to try to tighten and smooth our your rhymes. While poetry, of course, need not rhyme, I understand your desire to tell your story in rhyme – it adds a kind of “poetic” emphasis. The one place I think needs a little editing is:
to save her from another child
she knew this one was very wild! (this line is a little off in “rhythm” – perhaps something like “fearing this one would be wild!”) Just a suggestion.
Thank you so much for being a part of https://www.poetladykatz.com – and I look forward to seeing more of your work. Your friend in poetry, Susan
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