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    Aviana
    Participant

    Blood flows into the rivers,
    Into tree roots, into flowers
    That bloom and speak
    Into our deafness.

    Unheard melodies
    Of souls sting,
    Harmonious voices,
    Of the dying, sing
    A song into the wind that reeks
    Of never ending dusk.
    Somewhere.
    Far away.
    Somewhere within, we fear
    The truth, yet
    We choose to bind ourselves to the
    Stillness in tension.

    #18865
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    I am so sorry that it has taken me so long to respond to your very evocative and well written poem.  I have been in hospital and away from my computer, so this is the first I am seeing of your submission.

    Your poem is tight, well-composed and offers us a very strong sense of the “tension” you speak of.  Good job.  And, thank you so very much for sharing it with me,  Susan

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