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    Comfort
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    I spend time chatting with strangers,

    their words circling me like moths—

    soft, harmless, repetitive

    and all I can offer are borrowed nods:

    “Yes… hmmm… I see what you mean,”

    each one a polite stamp of existence

    that leads them deeper into monologues

    I never asked to host.

     

    I remain there like a mime in a glass box,

    performing silence,

    letting it stretch between us

    until it becomes a command:

    continue… keep talking… fill the space I’m drowning in.

     

    And somewhere beneath their small talk,

    I wish—just once—someone would read the air

    instead of the script.

    ” Have you seen the new episode of stranger thi…” Must’ve been interference.

    A breeze brushing past my ear, nothing more.

    Because surely no signal meant for me

    would arrive so…

     

    ” I love y…” 

    Must’ve the been the wind,

    The tide or the mind, 

    A light not meant to be found, 

    Wait, let me rewind :

    How I changed,

    My tone, structure and lines 

    Just not not be found. 

    Maybe I’m the… 

     

    I spend time chatting with strangers. 

    #18880
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thanks for sharing – another really well written, poetically composed poem – that makes some powerful points.  I particularly like your opening stanza and the way the message builds in the poem as you move through it.  I recently had someone send me an AI poem – it had all the elements and none of the feeling or meaning.  Your poems are always emotionally, as well as intellectually, accessible.

    #18881
    Comfort
    Participant

    I don't believe a simple thank you can express how impactful that compliment truly is.
    Thank you .

    #18882
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    It is my pleasure. I am always excited to discover someone who takes poetry seriously and yet still allows creative energy to dictate the journey of the poem. You are good!

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