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    Comfort
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    Drunk dust desert dreams

    Call 

    To the cracked-hearted, 

    Coaxing them with concussions created for the confined conscious minds, 

     

    Blind believers churn into levers

    trauma-heavy turning deceiver into leaders.

    Refusing realisation, 

    That stoic stillness , is still stillness,

    A stagnant state mistaken for strength.

     

    by half-heard hymns of “you can achieve your dreams,”

    as if destiny dialed their number

    and didn’t hang up. 

    As if gratitude created from grit can gratify

    The grief they carry.

     

    After all that, 

    Your anchor still echoes of aching anthems associated with lullabies. 

     

    And still, beneath the desert dusk,

    your shadow shivers 

    a lone silhouette pleading with the wind

    for a softness the world

    was never taught to give.

    #18883
    Susan Katz
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    Another powerful poem.  Some memorable lines: (That stoic stillness , is still stillness /

    As if gratitude created from grit can gratify

    The grief they carry. / and the whole last stanza.)  Another thoughtful, meaningful, successful poetic effort.  As always, thank you for sharing, Susan

     

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