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May 18, 2021 at 9:08 am
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Keymaster
Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem with me. There is so much love and joy in your poem and you have some very beautiful images as well. I would like to suggest that you don’t work so hard on rhyming, your poetry would stand out even more if you concentrated on your beautiful and meaningful images. I am happy to consider your poem for Featured Poem of the Month for June. Keep writing – you have talent, Susan

