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Susan Katz
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Your poem is so emotionally charged and there are some very lovely, meaningful, and intensely felt lines that will, I know, resonate with anyone who reads your poem.  I particularly liked “Did you change or did your heart?”  And also, the very simple but important line “And you didn’t even water the plants” because I took “plants” to be a metaphor for your relationship, for you.  Well done, Susan