Poetry Talk

Thank you for sharing your poem with me and for submitting it for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month for July.  I particularly liked your line “Now you have become my poetry…” as it gives us a glimpse into you and to what inspires you to write.  I would suggest that you go back over your poem and see if you can edit a bit on English translation, as you have wonderful ideas/visions that are not stated as clearly, in English, as one would hope,  Please do keep on writing, as I can sense the passion in you for words and poetry, Susan