Poetry Talk

Thank you for submitting this very intense and emotional poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month for July.  Your poem has a very real and very meaningful message and we can feel your pain, your anguish your “crushed soul.”  I would suggest, if I may, that you go over and check your English translation, as there are instances where the tenses are wrong, spelling is wrong, or meaning is not quite right.  The concept of “muting not only your voice” but your soul, as well – is strong and powerful.  Thank you for sharing with me, Susan