Poetry Talk

Thank you so much for sharing your very heartfelt poem with me.  I can feel the emotion you are trying to express.  I wonder if you would be interested in editing your poem – shortening it and using more in the way of images.  It is too long for me to feature in my current submission request but, perhaps, if you were to tighten it and create more in the way of “visual” images, I might be able to use it in the coming weeks.  Again, I am so happy to have had a chance to read your poem.  Your friend in poetry, Susan