Poetry Talk

Thank you for sharing your work with me.  You have some very fine moments in this poem which does seem to have a classical feel to it.  I believe there may be some moments when the translation into English is a bit confusing.  This poem is a bit long for me to consider for featuring in our current request for two to four line poems (non-rhyming.)  But, keep writing – you have, I believe, a passion for it.  Your friend in poetry, Susan